Ravi Sathasivam


A Beautiful Day With My Love...... - Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

When the sun rise in the morning
then you shine like a brighten lady
When the moon set in the evening
then you look like a beautiful lady
When I go to bed in the night
then you twinkle like stars
When the cool breeze touches me
then I take care of your love
When you are under my arms
then I tell you how much I love you
When I say my night prayers
then I thank God for giving you to me
When I close my eyes to sleep
then you rest your head on my chest
and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.


Comments about A Beautiful Day With My Love...... by Ravi Sathasivam

  • Akhtar Jawad (6/4/2014 10:05:00 AM)


    A beautiful description of love. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/20/2013 12:24:00 PM)


    Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (3/28/2013 8:53:00 PM)


    A truly enjoyed piece of poetry. Lose yourself in love.
    I appreciate this lovely and romantic write. Truly enjoyable.
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  • (6/25/2010 12:37:00 AM)


    ‘When I close my eyes to sleep
    then you rest your head on my chest
    and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.’…such state is called beyond oneself and in/ within herself/himself…soused in emotive elements…you carried me farthest far…by your poetry…I envy your Lady Luck…being a lady for getting such a passionate beau…lolol …. thanks sharing
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • (3/13/2010 11:41:00 PM)


    that is so beautiful.... (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2009 4:00:00 AM)


    Yes indeed very nice....
    Well crafted
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  • (12/5/2009 11:40:00 PM)


    Your soft thoughts and whispering dreams are well contained in this beautifully expressive poem. Many thanks, mandara (Report) Reply

  • (10/5/2009 6:11:00 AM)


    When the cool breeze touches.....YOU TAKE CARE OF YOUR LOVE! ! !
    How magnificent a love poem can be! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I'm speechless.......So I'm writing....
    Very very romantic n beautiful.....Well done.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2009 10:16:00 AM)


    then I thank God for giving you to me
    When I close my eyes to sleep
    then you rest your head on my chest
    and listen to my heart beat says you are mine...these are romantic andmemorable moments one enjoys inthe life.. i loved the weaving inwords....10

    read mine indreverse way...divorce...no separate ways... homebound... come home
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  • (9/2/2009 8:16:00 AM)


    Very romantic! ! ! I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing, and for your comments as well.
    Keep it up!
    God bless you!

    -Pink Butterfly-
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  • (8/30/2009 1:04:00 PM)


    wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read.......................10 (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (6/21/2009 1:16:00 PM)


    'When I close my eyes to sleep
    then you rest your head on my chest
    and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.'

    Cute lovely love poem. As if a dream!
    (Report) Reply

  • (6/2/2009 7:15:00 AM)


    contentment in life is in the arms of lovers..beautiful poem, expressing love..grace (Report) Reply

  • (6/2/2009 6:38:00 AM)


    oh! wonderfull and happy family life.beautifully expressed.posted 10
    surya
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  • (12/23/2008 3:07:00 PM)


    I agree with simple yet so meaningful. (Report) Reply

  • (8/27/2008 7:28:00 AM)


    a very simple and cute love poem, , , (Report) Reply

  • (7/7/2008 6:12:00 AM)


    simple yet meaningful... i like this poem.

    best regards,
    joan d.h.
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  • Cyclopseven R (6/23/2007 11:57:00 AM)


    Azhagane oru kavithai. wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2004 5:54:00 AM)


    Very nice in its simplicity.
    H
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 8, 2004

Poem Edited: Monday, April 19, 2010


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