A Beautiful Day With My Love...... Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

A Beautiful Day With My Love......

Rating: 3.9


When the sun rise in the morning
then you shine like a brighten lady
When the moon set in the evening
then you look like a beautiful lady
When I go to bed in the night
then you twinkle like stars
When the cool breeze touches me
then I take care of your love
When you are under my arms
then I tell you how much I love you
When I say my night prayers
then I thank God for giving you to me
When I close my eyes to sleep
then you rest your head on my chest
and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pink Butterfly ... 02 September 2009

Very romantic! ! ! I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing, and for your comments as well. Keep it up! God bless you! -Pink Butterfly-

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 September 2009

then I thank God for giving you to me When I close my eyes to sleep then you rest your head on my chest and listen to my heart beat says you are mine...these are romantic andmemorable moments one enjoys inthe life.. i loved the weaving inwords....10 read mine indreverse way...divorce...no separate ways... homebound... come home

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Munia Khan 05 October 2009

When the cool breeze touches.....YOU TAKE CARE OF YOUR LOVE! ! ! How magnificent a love poem can be! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I'm speechless.......So I'm writing.... Very very romantic n beautiful.....Well done.

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Mandara Pookal 05 December 2009

Your soft thoughts and whispering dreams are well contained in this beautifully expressive poem. Many thanks, mandara

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Eyan Desir 09 December 2009

Yes indeed very nice.... Well crafted

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Akhtar Jawad 04 June 2014

A beautiful description of love.

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Marieta Maglas 20 September 2013

Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing

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Patricia Grantham 28 March 2013

A truly enjoyed piece of poetry. Lose yourself in love. I appreciate this lovely and romantic write. Truly enjoyable.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 25 June 2010

‘When I close my eyes to sleep then you rest your head on my chest and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.’…such state is called beyond oneself and in/ within herself/himself…soused in emotive elements…you carried me farthest far…by your poetry…I envy your Lady Luck…being a lady for getting such a passionate beau…lolol …. thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Cristali Araguz 13 March 2010

that is so beautiful....

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