Daniel Brick

Gold Star - 71,582 Points (June 10,1947 / St. Paul MN)

A Beauty-Day Early Spring,2017 - Poem by Daniel Brick

It's not as if I owned this day,
its beauty across the Twin Cities
burnishing people and places
with the gold of time glowing
between here and eternity. We all
borrowed a portion of our joy today
which puts all of us in debt
to the deep source that lies
beneath beauty and lends its truth.
But this debt is no extravagance:
it is more bond, than obligation,
a way to link all material things
into a wholeness, a spiritual heritage
in our endeavor to become higher beings.

Topic(s) of this poem: myth, prayer


Comments about A Beauty-Day Early Spring,2017 by Daniel Brick

  • Chinedu Dike (6/10/2017 7:58:00 PM)


    A well thought-out piece. Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. A heartwarming poem Daniel. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Daniel Brick Daniel Brick (6/10/2017 10:37:00 PM)

    I wrote this poem so the beauty of the day and the beauty of language could be shared. Thanks much
    for your delight.

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  • Glen Kappy (5/31/2017 10:10:00 AM)


    Alright, Daniel.

    So I started reading your work, and I picked this one first because the title (and some of the ideas as it turned out) reminded me of my recent poem, Semi-retired in Early Spring.

    In your poem I relate to and like the recgnition of how the natural world can lift and restore us- a theme I return to again and again in my work. In its feeling I'm reminded of a Wordsworth sonnet, Upon Westminster Bridge (?) .

    On the effects of light you mention, I think of poem, Just 15th Street.

    On to another poem,

    Glen
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  • Robert Murray Smith (3/20/2017 8:40:00 PM)


    A poem of beauty. Daniel, I enjoyed this work of art.+++10

    Robert
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 20, 2017

Poem Edited: Monday, March 20, 2017


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