A Better Place Poem by louis rams

A Better Place

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All the tears that I have shed, and all the blood that I have bled
Cannot compare to what lies ahead
My soul mate, the love of my life is going to a place in paradise.
She says the gates have opened wide for her " to go inside ".
Family and friends have gathered around for she is heaven bound.
The pathway is lit up with lights so bright, and all the
Angels in plain sight.
" Swing Low, Sweet Chariot "being sung by a choir
Burning in her heart like a fire.
Her eyes are glassy and she has a smile on her face
Telling me she's going to a better place.
For me not to cry, not to shed a tear for in my
Heart she'll always be there.
I held her in my arms till her last breath, and now
I must lay her to rest.
I know I'll follow you thru heavens gate
So wait for me - I won't be late.
© L. RAMS 012320

Thursday, January 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 23 January 2020

A fine and lofty verse, well conceived and nicely brought forth with spiritual insight. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Louis.

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Louis Rams 23 January 2020

your comment means so much to me and thank you for sharing your beautiful work also

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