*******************a Womans Insight*************1978 Poem by louis rams

*******************a Womans Insight*************1978

Rating: 2.8

i felt a slight twinge in my heart
that deep down burning feeling tearing me apart.
i thought that it would go away
but now i know it's here to stay.

that feeling of when i look at my childs
picture at night.
and i go to her room to make
sure she's allright.
to see that smile upon her face
and i know she's dreaming of satin and lace.

i go back to bed, and all i could see
my little girls eyes burning thru me.
telling me of things that she will need
when she reaches puberty.

then she will reach that stage in life
when she herself will become a wife.

this is the part of life that a parent must bear
this is the part that they have to share.
to give their little girl to another
and wait for her to become a mother.

to see her go through the same stages in life
to have to go thru those struggles and strife.

now when she looks into her little childs eyes
she'll get that same feeling by and by.
and she'll know it was passed down the line.

Kranthi Pothineni 31 August 2009

Beautiful and creatively penned. Lovely.

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Jessie Bernabe Cadsawan 31 August 2009

Oh, Louis, that is a very wonderful message to your daughter! I am touched for that fatherly love... Not all fathers in the planet are like you! I appreciate your lines, let it be seen by the world so that love can touch souls! It can be applied not nly to daughters, but to all children of all genders and parents too! i rate you 10! EXCELLENT!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 September 2009

now when she looks into her little childs eyes she'll get that same feeling by and by. and she'll know it was passed down the line. it is greatness of woman to have insight for emerging woman in child.. same struggle and smae passing of stage with so much care and worry.. i lovley presentation sir. i am fo rit...10 read mine papa do u know..papa u too...mom i miis u

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Melvina Germain 07 August 2015

We do have this beautiful Blessing and all we have to do is pa; y attention and listen to our inner voice. God is so good, all the time. Thank you Louis for your precious poems.....

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Heather Wilkins 30 May 2013

the female has an insight no other can match. Given to her by GOD to protet her children. lovely write

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Adeline Foster 13 February 2012

Interesting, it is not easy to look beneath the actions of others and see the life behind the desires and loses. Read mine Cicatrix - Adeline

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A rich matriarch type poem. A womans love was truly captured in your write! ; D

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 29 December 2009

beautifully handed down the line...the wealth of love

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