ITS 2 in the mourning, im thinking about
my own death, its so easy i think, for me
to end these mood swings, by cutting in
a strait line, and then i pray, again, and again,
but all i see is a bunch of christens, laughing,
and locking all thier doors, .
repent, repent, repent, stand up in fight,
show the world your strong, and can lift
any amount of wieght.
ITS 2 in the mourning, i take a bunch of pills,
sleeping pills, but they dont work, so i take
some thing eles like elevil, still it doesnt
work.
repent, repent, repent, stand up and fight,
show the world your strong, and can lift
any amoint of wieght.............
Hi David, This is really sad. I am hoping this was the past because of 89. It really sounded like you had a great deal of stress at the time. I feel very bad for you. I think that life is short enough and we don't need to make it shorter.
I hear and feel every word in this piece. Very good, very real, almost too real. Carolyn
Wow, a very sad moment for you David. Nicely written. Sincerely, Mary
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
FELLOW poets, a real bipoler moment..........................