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A Bipoler Moment,89 - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

ITS 2 in the mourning, im thinking about
my own death, its so easy i think, for me
to end these mood swings, by cutting in
a strait line, and then i pray, again, and again,
but all i see is a bunch of christens, laughing,
and locking all thier doors, .
repent, repent, repent, stand up in fight,
show the world your strong, and can lift
any amount of wieght.
ITS 2 in the mourning, i take a bunch of pills,
sleeping pills, but they dont work, so i take
some thing eles like elevil, still it doesnt
repent, repent, repent, stand up and fight,
show the world your strong, and can lift
any amoint of wieght.............

Comments about A Bipoler Moment,89 by DAVID GERARDINO

  • (10/7/2006 12:23:00 PM)

    Wow, sad and powerful... (Report) Reply

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  • (7/16/2006 5:03:00 PM)

    Hi David, This is really sad. I am hoping this was the past because of 89. It really sounded like you had a great deal of stress at the time. I feel very bad for you. I think that life is short enough and we don't need to make it shorter. (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2005 6:43:00 AM)

    Your accessing your base, that is most important. (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2005 1:48:00 PM)

    I hear and feel every word in this piece. Very good, very real, almost too real. Carolyn (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2005 8:29:00 PM)

    Wow, a very sad moment for you David. Nicely written. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

  • (11/11/2005 7:22:00 PM)

    FELLOW poets, a real bipoler moment.......................... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 11, 2005

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