A Blatant Lie Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
A Blatant Lie
He lied to me on every occasion
I had all the reservations but no confusion
He was do close to me and very good friend
I saw good opportunity to change him at the end
How can you deceive a person?
Why do you act contrary without any reason?
Why all people stick to the norms including seasons?
Do the parents keep different attitude to their daughter and son?
Such things don’t exist but still it prevails
We can notice it in language when receive the mails
They speak of different tone
The relation go in vane and simply undone
It has nothing to do with blood relation
It is mere extension or facilitation
Its pulse is felt from within
It may come in purest form and pour in
We shut our eyes when realize the gravity
We may soon find out its utility
It may not find favor for its continuity
There develops cracks in unity
It may impair the relation and develop some thaw
You may be compelled to compromise or forgo
You may hesitate for a moment to withdraw
There is nothing left now for anything to draw
You are likely to loose your peace of mind
He might have been thorough out the period very kind
It was unparallel and was never to be found again
The trust once lost can’t be earned or regained
It pinches heart and some grief is felt
The anger may take over and not melt
You may not like it to open again and again
All your attempts may be to take caution and refrain
It may compel you to make some mends
You may cautiously move with some amends
It has done enough damage beyond control
You may certainly feel bad and short of goal
It crates deep scar and impact
The heart is filled with grief in fact
You may not find the way to react
You got to make it good by enough tact
Many of your close relatives may be lying
They may have different version at the time of dieing
It has to be taken on face value and understand
If you can do this then you will find favorable stand
Even your enemy may not stab you from the back
He may be your sworn enemy but not attack
It has to be taken as reality and experience at all the stages
Even your friends may some time surprise you in your age
i can't rmb where i've read this from but a poet once said this, 'an honest friend is the best thing and an honest enemy the next best.' i agree and i think this poem brings this idea out very nicely. :)
Lies and untruth mostly comes from people we trust and close and that's nature they will take our love and care for ride & granted. ' We shut our eyes when realize the gravity We may soon find out its utility It may not find favor for its continuity There develops cracks in unity' the most real expression and i really happy to read this poem over and over again. It is so simple yet complicated caused everybody hide their betrayal deep within themself and shall have no confession from them ever. Believe me, your poem is 100% tally with what I use to face, betrayal frm friends & family and it's hurt me most. They are worst than our enemy and you put it in simple words that they are back-stabber and that's fact nobody can deny. excellent as the most real to the type of betrayal and treason frm close friend or family. 10 for you.
He lied to me on every occasion... reason to feel very bad... good poem......10
Even your enemy may not stab you from the back He may be your sworn enemy but not attack It has to be taken as reality and experience at all the stages Even your friends may some time surprise you in your age Surprisingly you are writing some truths to combat the lies. Perhaps it is the achievement of writing poem. Yes, you have got your own tongue and mission to attain. Thank you very much. Regards, 10+ Apoet Bangla
v He lied to me on every occasion I had all the reservations but no confusion He was do close to me and very good friend.. it affects our morale too...10
I hate lying, hypocrisy and betrayal! ! Indeed a meaningful and beautiful poem! keep it up :)
He lied to me on every occasion I had all the reservations but no confusion He was do close to me and very good friend I saw good opportunity to change him at the end .. it can can create wrong impression...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 8:18:19 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Good poem with a lot of wisdom. I appreciate honesty perhaps more than anything else. Honesty is a sign of true friendship Even if the liar seems to ahve some short term gains The cost of peace of mind is never worth it. Thanks for sharing this poem