Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Gold Star - 568,111 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

A Bottom Of Heart - Poem by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

Such nice feeling from bottom of the heart
No one knows exactly when it will end or start
It can not be marketed all over for certain price
It is so precious and its feeling is very nice

Books after books are written on this subject
No one has advanced any particular reason to reject
It has such a tremendous driving force to sweep
You will be left with joy and later on only to weep

No one should live under fallacy
It has lots of joy and fantasy
Not difficult but it is not that easy
Keeps you wondering and very much busy

One may be counting starts in night
No one may know exactly what is right?
It is to be felt from within and alone
It has its own joy to be enjoyed by one

Have you seen person weeping with joy?
Talking silently with beautiful toy
It is such a unique feeling in lovely life
More joy of having her than making a beautiful wife

It is delicate phase one may pass through
All lies around and nothing seems to him true
Only one word strikes his mind all the way
“I long for you and can not remain away”

It is nice to feel all the way very good
No care for anybody and neglecting the food
It is like child asking for impossible
Landing in unexplored field with trouble

You may rightly attempt to write poetic verses
Tearing papers, writing all over and near misses
Nothing goes right from the beginning
It has disastrous start with the innings

One may try to hide the face but can not cry in open
Try to prove point by painting gloomy side with pen
Then also if no way is found out, going for long drive
Thinking all the positively how to come out of it and survive



May be it is lover’s exclusive zone
All novel ideas and new concept is borne
There is no room for backing out or escape route
No norms or any kind of rules to flout

It is always good to pass through such stage
It gives tremendous strength and power to manage
It can take place at any time and in any age
It will certainly be a unique experience and golden page

Almighty has made certain things for each other
Sometimes it may add to tension and make us to bother
But ultimate end will be very much positive and in order
The noble act has to be performed by not crossing the border


Comments about A Bottom Of Heart by Hasmukhlal Amathalallal

  • Putri Misnia Shary Bahri (1/4/2014 11:11:00 AM)


    very meaningful only the heart can speak it out through words (Report) Reply

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  • (12/2/2010 8:07:00 PM)


    You may rightly attempt to write poetic verses
    Tearing papers, writing all over and near misses
    Nothing goes right from the beginning
    It has disastrous start with the innings

    Really great poem, there is so much truth and heart in your writing. These lines really hit home for me. Beautifully written I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.
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  • (12/1/2010 10:55:00 PM)


    You have come out of a sincere truth. Your poem depicts a fine imagery of the whole situation. I liked it.
    A thoughtful write.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 1, 2010



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