A Busted Myth Poem by Robin Bennett

A Busted Myth

Rating: 4.5


Baby, hold me tight and-
away from the grips of sheer insanity,
I don't do love at first sight,
Something I consider a myth,
or a gypsy folk tale at best.

I had the perfect vantage point,
when you walked in, your-
confidence preceded you,
by a mile.
Until the whole exquisite part-
caught up with you.
It was then that love sucker,
punched me, and I fell hard.

Gravity was no longer a
concern of mine. Between you
and the booze buzz, I was engulfed.
My head spinning in some strange
space place. Light years ahead of
myself, I was already naming our babies!

Usually, this motor mouth can't be quieted,
until now. I was sputtering out foolishness
a mile a minute. Finally valium relaxed,
my sanity returned. The longer we spoke,
the harder I loved. But, I don't believe
in love at first sight or the loch ness monster.

After a few weeks of "us", I was opiate hooked,
feeling warm and fuzzy inside;
and wanting no part of giddy love rehab-
I just wanted to enjoy that sky high ride,
I had never known.
For years, we loved fearing the Earth
would surely spin out of control.

Tuesday, July 17, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: insanity,relaxed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 28 July 2012

Hot and buzzy. Licking myths like Honey.

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James Harding 22 July 2012

drinking taking valiums and opiates... he took advantage of you while you was drunk you didn't have a chance to escape the love lol good write 10/10

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Ronn Michael Salinas 22 July 2012

There are unnecessary punctuations, it seems. The drug references are worrisome lol to be honest

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Connor Whyte 20 July 2012

Fascinating this really spoke to me I don't believe in love at first sight but when you feel it you don't want to believe it. This is a beauty.

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Black On Black Arts 19 July 2012

Robin you are indeed a great writer light years ahead of anything i have written or read i only wish i could draw such a vivid picture in my work as you did u made me a believer thats no myth B.O.B.A

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Robin Bennett

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New Orleans, La USA
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