A Carry Bag Of Thoughts Poem by GOPIKA RADEESH
A Carry Bag Of Thoughts
The words did shatter,
Tears spurted out.
Heart did wring,
Legs did quiver,
And senses, so fretful.
An unexpected demise,
Punched me from behind,
And all I could do was
To lie idle, drenched in grief.
You were the grip I was
Holding on, till this day.
But now, I am left forlorn.
You were the strong backing,
In every can of worms,
Never did I realize that
I would lose you forthwith.
The way you cared and,
The way you caressed,
Makes you the best
Out of a trillion women.
Though a thousand miles away,
Your breaths can be felt, near
The Chambers of my heart.
A brave style of poetic expression about Parting with someone is so beautifully Expressed.. for every stanza sounds so honest and gives high Philosophical whiffs!
A poignant piece of poetry! Pulsating expression loaded with deep emotion for losing something valuable still believing for a spiritual union! Fantastic.....Though a thousand miles away/Your breaths can be felt, near The Chambers of my heart.......Full marks for the piece of work with effervescent tone! .....10
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9/24/2024 12:59:23 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A wonderful poem dear Gopika. Brilliantly penned