Farewell To My Soul… Poem by GOPIKA RADEESH
Farewell To My Soul…
I am bidding a farewell,
Waving my palms and
Not letting the sluggish sting
Deluge from my mirrors.
Mirrors, that hold a
thousand reflections of my soul.
As I am spending my last
Few moments with you,
I am constantly hit by the
Songs of pain that
We sang in melancholy;
Prayers we made, for not
Parting, so fragile were those.
Your love were my words,
And you, the poetry.
Your love were my roads,
And you, my destination.
The pain that fills me,
My heart, it's growing
To my veins and spine;
To my veins which bore
Glittery dreams, they are shattered,
They are burnt.
Oh! My tongue did taste
The bitterness of your departure,
The twinge has filled my
Gut and my intestines.
"Dear soul, you were mighty,
But now, you are gone."
And hence my soul did
Dissolve into the world
Of utter silence, it's aphotic.
An amazing poem! Pulsating expression! My favorite lines: Your love were my words/And you, the poetry/Your love were my roads/And you, my destination/The pain that fills me/My heart, it's growing! Appreciated....10
A good start with a nice poem, Gopika. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.
the frustration of love and seperation is artistically depicted
and exactly a Time I got to read this PoemFarewell to myt SOUL thank you Poet! ! 100(10000 times) ! !
Great talent you are... May you succeed in life sis.... Nice write... Distance is from the HEAVEN but the soul of yours is still walking with.... Beyond horizon...... Deserves 10 +++++... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila
'Unbelievable a title'.. and very nicely expressed.., thought provoking and deeply Philosophical. Thank you for sharing Poet. a Definite 10! ! (wishing you a wonderful Poetic Journey) ! - Siddartha Montik
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I am constantly hit by the Songs of pain that We sang in melancholy: beautiful poems: thanks for sharing-10