A Chase After Love - 02 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

A Chase After Love - 02

Rating: 5.0


Days passed,
Months passed,
Years of waiting-

For someone might
Turn up a day.

Like a pomegranate
In the mountains high
I had been waiting,

Smiling with mouths open
And my pearls-
dropped one by one,
One after another,

Till the last one
Fell down-
Last afternoon,
This autumn.

Sunday, October 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,loneliness,longing,love,love and dreams,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alina Kaikeyi 26 November 2017

Till the last one Fell down- Last afternoon, This autumn. Simply superb. 10++++ Thanks Sir for it.

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Alina, Thanks dear for your heartfelt remarks.

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Sabita Sahoo 16 November 2017

Till the last one Fell down- Last afternoon, This autumn. Simply superb. 10++

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Sabita, Thanks my dear for your heartfelt remarks.

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 15 November 2017

Smiling with mouths open And my pearls- dropped one by one, One after another, Till the last one Fell down- Last afternoon, This autumn. Simply superb. 10++++

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Ranjan, Thanks my dear for your heartfelt remarks.

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D Priyanka Singh 03 October 2017

A great poem of tons of imagery in a vivid way.

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Priyanka, Thanks my dear for your heartfelt remarks.

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Susan Williams 01 October 2017

I like your voice- -it is rich yet simple- no gaudiness here, no drowning the verses with words gathered from a dictionary here. This is straight from the heart and soul of a man experiencing loneliness and an intense longing for love to give and love to receive. And my pearls- dropped one by one, One after another, Till the last one Fell down- Last afternoon, This autumn. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This lingers in my mind... lovely, haunting, and human. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 October 2017

Thanks my revered poetess for your great kindness and careful remarks placed so sweetly. It would keep inspiring me.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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