A Chase After Love Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

A Chase After Love

Rating: 5.0


All of a sudden

I felt a hue

And a cry

Silent, buried

Deep within me.


As I looked

On and on,

I saw it was you-

Inviting me to follow-

With your bluish looks

With your reddish lips

With your open arms.



I started chasing you

I chased you,

You chased the clouds,

With wings of desire.



The clouds followed

The moon,

You followed

The cloud,

I followed you

Till you faded

Into the hollowness

Of the bye gone memories.

A Chase After Love
Tuesday, May 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming,love,love and art,love and dreams,love and friendship,love and life,memoirs,cloud,dream,dream girl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabita Sahoo 05 June 2016

The clouds followed The moon, You followed The cloud, I followed you Till you faded Into the hollowness Of the bye gone memories. Loved these lines. Thanks for sharing the poem.

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Alina Kaikeyi 26 November 2017

I saw it was you- Inviting me to follow- With your bluish looks With your reddish lips With your open arms. I started chasing you... Beautiful love poem, nicely written. 10 for it. Thanks.

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Alina, Thanks my dear for your heartfelt remarks and full marks.

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Alina Kaikeyi 26 November 2017

I started chasing you... Beautiful love poem, nicely written. 10 for it. Thanks.

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Alina dear, Thanks my dear for your heartfelt remarks.

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Rajendra Rout 14 November 2017

The clouds followed The moon, You followed The cloud, I followed you Till you faded Into the hollowness Of the bye gone memories.i enjoy this line....10++++++for it

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Rajendra, Thanks my dear for your heartfelt remarks.

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Indira Renganathan 04 September 2017

Very picturesque poem....interesting content....thanks for sharing this fantastic poem here....thanks for your comment on my poem too..God bless you

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 04 September 2017

Thanks Ma'am for your kind visit and gracious remarks.

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Anita Aparajita Das 20 June 2016

As I looked On and on, I saw it was you- Inviting me to follow- With your bluish looks With your reddish lips With your open arms. I started chasing you... Beautiful love poem, nicely written. 10 for it. Thanks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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