A Chocolate Dream Comments
Dark, dark heavenly chocolate
Makes my heart leap up and fascinates,
I dream to live in a choco castle
Where choco boats and choco vessels
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chocolate dreams of heart in desire make the mind in a trance/bravo
Beautiful poem Jasmine. I feel I am travelling in a chocolate vessel, full of chocolates... Loved it.
to be in trance is not a harm to other every body got right to dream after all sweet delicious chocolate is a dream for peace thank Yasmeen
Hahahaha if everything is choc then life is so sweet...but will it rot my teeth sooner? somehow this poem remind me the story of Hansel and Gretel....but sure its all good thing only we want to dream....now time for chocolate drink..thanks for making me so hungry now hahaha_Soul
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12/5/2025 1:27:05 AM # 1.0.0
reading your poem, the whole scene of 'charlie and the chocolate factory' that i read a few months ago revolved in my mind... well its a sweet delicious poem, I'd say delicious because it filled my mouth with water: p lol regards hira