A Clear Move Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Clear Move

Rating: 3.2


See the world above
Stay where ever you are and don't move
See it to your self to reach at the end
Don't see others as masters but only friends

It might have proved too difficult
To come out of it with some insult
The frustration is in open with result
The foundation may be weak even if rebuilt

Try to reason out with your own experience
Add something to it with real context in presence
Never go for any acknowledgement or insistence
It may prove as contrary to draw any inference

The world may not look glamorous or appealing
The nice idea to flow with it may be repealing
We may feel awkward and attempt for concealing
It may aggravate the wounds without proper healing

The world may look colorful if you are wealthy
It may add more color if you are strong enough and healthy
It may add woes and so much agony
If you starve others for want of money

Be liberal in out look with real zeal and urge
Let good ideas emanate from heart and emerge
It may grant you happiness with satisfaction
This may be taken as reward or indication

You may not see it with different eye
You can’t see through glasses and try
It may be viewed with different angle
It may present different triangle

Use clear instinct with the micro mind
Process it with large images and find
Does it miss any of the ingredients?
Do we feel child as if without parents

See the images and form the opinion
It may suit or may not suit the companion
It has to do with your own judgment
There may not be then any illusory moments

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darshna Chopra 06 August 2010

See the world above Stay where ever you are and don't move See it to your self to reach at the end Don't see others as masters but only friends........see the it reasonably....10

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Antonio Liao 04 August 2010

may the illusion of the mind, would not change the words of your line....you give us to believe that, the yes would do nothing but to hold on the beginning of faith....very beautiful reflection....God bless a 10 +++

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Samantha Collins 04 August 2010

nice poem, i really likes the wording. the fourth stanza was my favoritee. nice job (: keep writting! !

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Maulin Shah 03 August 2010

It might have proved too difficult To come out of it with some insult The frustration is in open with result The foundation may be weak even if rebuilt...........ya lack of trust disheartens a person....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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