A Closed Eyes Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Closed Eyes

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I closed eyes passionately
Your response had come very lately
It was longed from the day one
I dreamed of you only and none

You were avoiding the scene
Your commitment was not at all seen
You lacked some courage and strength
I was on correct wave length

You sprang surprise all of sudden
You bore nice smile from face sullen
It was major upset turning into embarrassment
You were all out for suspicious movement

It was clear dig at me
You made it look completely free
I waited eagerly for all these days
You deliberately stayed far and long away

It was definitely change in your style
I was amused and wondered for a while
You gently moved and tightly embraced
Such dilemma I had never faced

It offered me unique joy and happiness
It was pleasant surprise to remove loneliness
What to say more about it or less?
I was prepared to accept it in any case

I remained quiet and silent
It was pride and happy moment
He had seen the point and realized
I surrendered without things to be analyzed

I was full of confidence and it was matter of joy
I didn' t want to waste and completely enjoy
It comes once a while in life to illuminate
You feel equal to fall in line and peacefully narrate

A Closed Eyes
Thursday, August 5, 2010
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 08 December 2022

It comes once a while in life to illuminate You feel equal to fall in line and peacefully narrate....precious expression.

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Vanessa Svaleson 02 September 2010

Very nice flow and passion to it. I could feel every word

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Darshna Chopra 06 August 2010

I closed eyes passionately Your response had come very lately It was longed from the day one....... it was late response....10

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Maulin Shah 05 August 2010

It was longed from the day one I dreamed of you only and none ... good compnionship....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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