A Constant Fire Poem by Barry Middleton

A Constant Fire

Rating: 3.5


the sun is fading from my view
obscuring everything I knew
I trust that it will rise again for me

it is the only constant fire
its faithful heat fulfills desire
it is more resolute than fading love

love is a comet's cold deceit
a blaze of light that brings no heat
and streaks away to tease the universe

the setting sun marks the years
recording all my hopes and fears
and melts away the frost of bitter grief

I only ask for time to share
a dream or two without despair
before the fire surrenders to the cold

A Constant Fire
Saturday, February 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: faith,grief,love and loss,trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
upmajhi 17 April 2019

beautiful sun set and comparing with comet.

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Samuel Adesunloro 18 February 2016

very good, amazing barvo

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Dimitrios Galanis 06 February 2016

The human pain has not found a pen like yours, dear Barry.In a tragoedian way you draw its path through the life.

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Barry Middleton 06 February 2016

Well I would not go that far but I do feel I occasionally hit the mark. Thank you for your very flattering and encouraging comments.

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