A Crazy Impulse, An Urgent Need Poem by Ghada Shahbender

A Crazy Impulse, An Urgent Need

Rating: 3.6

Uncontrollably weeping I reach for my phone
I ring him up and get an out of service tone
I know he's away and that's all I'll hear
But somehow when I call him I feel he's near
I write him a message that he'll never read
I have this crazy impulse, this urgent need
I know its irrational, I know its insane
But it helps me through the day and eases the pain

M Mostaqul Haque 11 March 2014

A psyco-therapic love poem, Thanks.

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Preeti - is here! 17 August 2006

your poem reminds me of me....i write these messages too, i type them out on my mobile and never send them! I liked the free flowing stule of your poem. Preets

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Raynette Eitel 22 June 2005

This is universal and appealing. I would like you to try (for yourself) this poem in free verse and see if it has more impact. Sometimes rhyme gets in the way. (although I write in rhyme often.) Raynette

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Nasra Al Adawi 13 May 2005

Assalam, out of all the poems the one I read of yours this one had touched me the most...

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David Gerardino 20 December 2004

nice job....right to the point.l

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