A Dad's Prayer Comments

Awesome poem. Written with true feeling. I liked it.....

Marvelous poem, Bala. Thanks for sharing. Peace

Amazingly honest and truthful, an accurate portrayal of the aged in our day and age. After working all their lives for their families, now being abandoned for things of the world, while they struggle to get food and shelter. Children need to step up and take care of their elderly parents while they are still here. There are no tomorrows at this late stage in their lives. Totally honest and forthright poem, wrenching our hearts within. Thank you so much for this beautiful and heartfelt poem! ! ! I give it a 10! Thank you for sharing with the world, your message needed to be conveyed throughout the younger generations.. RoseAnn

A well articulated piece of poetry elegantly penned with conviction. A food for thought for all those who abandoned and neglect their aged parents. Lovely poem bristling with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

Otherwise, no point crying when I am gone .enjoyed .good write. Thanks for sharing