We shall never be happy and trustworthy
If we live on somebody’s grace and mercy
That will kill our inner conscience and strength
It will prove counter productive and lout of length
We can never be comfortable and at ease
If we think negative and never live at peace
What prevents us to be more accommodative and friendly?
Why do we want to remain as prisoner in our own home and lonely?
Does the conductive atmosphere help to over come it by nature?
Can we shape and prove its worthiness in near future?
Have we to give set norms of life or simply surrounded by friends?
Yes, they may prove helpful if they remain best friends at the end
What bring our imminent fall or nose drive to the ground?
What is ultimate goal how that can be easily achieved and found?
It all depends on going to the right direction with mind so sound
It may gather momentum if we get together and go round
Our mind is incapacitated by the invasion of suspicion
We have lost the moral ground and lost any positive lien
It has engulfed and vitiated so much that we are totally blind
How is it possible to have positive approach with vicious mind?
We shall stay supreme and bind the force together
We can add new dimension with fame feather
It is not at all that impossible to achieve
If we adopt positive attitude of forget and forgive
To rise in arms for noble cause is not at all rebellion
Let there be enemies in large number or in billions
What may surface at the end is naked aggression by mighty?
It is in the hands of destiny power called almighty
Can we make inner peace with disturbed mind?
When people are deprived of rights by cruel kind
Will it show the correct path for early freedom?
If it does show or result in same with wisdom
Fight for freedom in peaceful manner is totally justified
What else path you suggest to be more qualified?
Whole world watches the scene with keen interest?
Whatever may be the out come but hopefully be the best
Never in past the saints have lead the peaceful procession
World history is full of such examples against such aggressions
I bow my head to the spiritual soul who stands for cause
May God give him the courage and divine power without any pause
can we make peace with disturbed mind? ? ? i just loved it. sure many unanmswered question lying in life.
HASMUKH - An interesting poem dealing mans feelings and responses. V 1 We all need inner grace and mercy and (V2) inner peace. (V3) There is an emphasis on Friends - (V4) movng together and working together as one. (V5) Why is there alwys mistrust? (V6) to overcome this we must stay positive and learn to forgive and forget past differences. (V7) Power prevails. The answer to the questions in V8 is NO NO NO NO. (V9) To revails we must have inner peace and inner frredom. (V10) saints prevail because they draw their power form the Spiritual Dimension. 'May God give them the courage and divine power without any pause'. Thank you for sharing. Yours in Poetry - JOHN.
great topic and beautiful penmanship.the deal is peace is fleeting, so are leaves.what will become of me?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We shall never be happy and trustworthy If we live on somebody’s grace and mercy That will kill our inner conscience and strength It will prove counter productive and lout of length.......fine contribution by lama..10 great fighter n thinker