You ask me: what I expect
Well! It is just a ‘date'.
While the abetting inky night
is writing down a tasteful menu,
in candle light just you and I,
Looking into each other's eyes;
our faces glowing in mild halos
amidst an expectant darkness
and screeching envious crickets.
Staring at each other as if
raring to bare our thoughts;
starting with hors d'oeuvre,
wine, up to a sweet dessert
allowing it to mature late
slowly, slyly, but surely
dissolving the inhibiting clout
fettering us for too long
to cut the ice
cuing coquettish passes,
forcing the gluttonous hearts break open
replete with unspelled passions
by those titillating slashes
from great Eros's floral stiletto
to spill out our secret wants
and chase out the dozing dark horse.
And, it all for now I thought!
Leave the remnant witching hours
to the great Cupid's verdict.
....compact composition where loves passions thoughts are hugging each other. ++++10
An amazing write uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem and I am sure my aunt would felt the same of your youthful date.
This is really an amazing date uncle. With my dear aunt in my mind, I read through the poem. Beautiful piece of your musings. Enjoyed the read and I am sure you would also like and enjoy my poem ' A date with a fool'
YOU ASKED ME TO GIVE YOU MY COMMENT ON YOUR POEM I DID IN MY LAST COMMENT I GAVE YOU A TEN PLUS TOLD YOU I WAS GLAD YOU MADE THE TO 500. LIKED THIS POEM
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly a joy to read. It showers you with pure emotion and passion. What more could a person want from a love poem. Excellent!