A Daughter's Gratitude To A Loving Mother Poem by Swatimalya Chattopadhyay
A Daughter's Gratitude To A Loving Mother
I can renounce all worldly pleasures
To strengthen our bond
Your love, care and concern are my treasures
Which precipitate a coating around
This makes me impervious to malignities outside
All my sufferings get alleviated
When you sit beside.
It reminds me of the school days
When on return throwing the bag,
I would cuddle you for long
And seek shelter in your lap.
From the juvenile to maturity
At the life's vertical shaft
You have shouldered all the burden
To hold me aloft.
But the law of eternity
Will not allow this pair of electrons
To remain in a bond.
Cruel time will snatch one electron
Leaving an ion (Loss of an electron) .
'Births' and ' Rebirths' not known to us
Whether those are true
But if they appear over and over
Shall always pray for a mother like you..
Dear Swatimalya, Your poem is much better and cool as well your ideas are vast and the way you write is smart and good so keep in writing please Well done here Luwi
swatimalya, thank you for this accessible poem on subjects noble and most important. i enjoyed reading it. -glen kappy
Your love, care and concern are my treasures Which precipitate a coating around...................... and i carry touch of divine wing by sway and i move learning to learn yet unknown love of touch by lofty petals mellows aplomb soul serenades by bloom of marigold breeze yet splashes over shadow of love i see the moon of wishes wades across journey pain mills through path of journey ahead i smear rungs of colors on skin of innocence passion sets up the heart to rain in vain as i live and love in vale of tunes beyond and within stance yet appeals what i need to know i do remember songs of soliloquy iridescent as reminiscence cries by falling of snowflakes
a very touching poem..its god's cruelty to bond and then seperate...i have lost both dad and mom...after getting used to their care and affection it is very difficult..whether they come as daughters and eventually mother us..we are never going to know...
like daughter like mother.both compliment each other. lovely and touching poem. voted10 surya
An interesting application of human bonds and chemical technology....But the mother's love is beyond scientific metaphors....But your sentiments shines through anyways... Cheers. Subroto
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But the law of eternity Will not allow this pair of electrons To remain in a bond............. .love of mother yet transcendent by eternity clone yet remembers as when anchored by genesis, , , , , , , , , , most passionate yet ingenious write by the deep feeling for mother, as mother`s grace always winks in us all along till last dregs of our breath on this mortal dusts, wonderful blazing the glory of mother by teary reminiscence as time makes apart tearing the chord, yet poignant reeling all through her cloned blood, a best tribute by gratitude as ever,10++++++++++++++++, thanks for sharing