Father prove day
is a special day
a way to a happy ray
Chance by chance our names were called
along the fathers we proudly walked
Her chance came and her name was called
through the audience alone she walked
On the stage,
she proudly explained
My dad is unlucky you can't see him at all
but lucky that he is seen whenever I give a call
He was a soldier in the wars
who lost his life for the sake of yours
leaving behind us alone
every step of our life is now a loan
which can not be fulfilled forever
hope the samis repeated never
He will return again
then a new life will begain
It's my faith
A daughter's faith
Very moving verses...Congratulations & thanks for these lines that convey so much emotion. May God be with you always, young lady!
Dear Areena your word are heart touching you write with a sweet flow Thanks for such a lovely poem I invite you to read my poems and express your views.
great touchy lines areena beautiful style...and a deep deep daughters love... done well there...may ur wish b granted.... mayb u'll like my poems 'daughters...' & 'winning smile..' cheers
why did you make me rate this one 10! this should have more than 10! hahaha... nice write!
great poem Areena.. really well penned.. well hats off to our BRAVEHEARTS.. LOVE prashant
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hey this is the truth, i like the way you write poems, and the fact that you write about God just makes it more special!