A Day Of Despair Poem by Sam S.Slait

A Day Of Despair

Rating: 4.6


Being alone as always,
This pain is consuming me,
No one to care for me,
In this empty world alone.

This darkness is all I feel,
All that I can see,
It makes me want to go,
To die and say goodbye,
To everyone that ever cared.

I feel so alone,
Late up at night holding myself,
Well I cry myself to sleep,
Know that no one cares.

A day of despair,
I despise everyday that I am here,
Living this life of mine,
Hurting endlessly,
By people I once thought cared,

Always betrayed,
Feeling a stab in the back,
Friends I once thought cared about me,
But what now.

Turn on me as usual,
I can't trust anyone but myself,
Yes I am alone,
Having to endure this pain,
All I do is suffer anymore.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 27 June 2011

A well penned and poignant write full of imagery! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! ...

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Zainab Nashe 05 April 2011

That is exactly what i'm afraid to fine myself in. And I hope I will not. I feel sorry for u.

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Leas Celyn 12 February 2011

i too have felt this way more often than not. even though it hurts, i appreciate u writing the truth...

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Trevor Tang 11 February 2011

i like it. Really. I can fully feel ur loneliness and depressing. u are just being dumped into a black room and just cry and cry, but no 1 cares. Emotional, Depressing. Like it.

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Neko Girl 07 February 2011

wow this poem is really deep are you emo because i used to be

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Kelsey Phillips 03 February 2012

i love this poem so much emotion i really like it

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Adeline Foster 01 February 2012

Everyone needs to purge themselves of such deep loneliness. Now it is time to give us some words of encouragement. Be inspired, read mine - Sudbury ON Canada - Adeline

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Vipins Puthooran 09 December 2011

Emotional poem/portrait'd in an elegant style! !

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*BleedingHeart* *Arielle* 11 November 2011

wow that was amazing i was just i dont have words for u have a great talent and a graeat voice u made this a poem by feeling and meaning it was breath taking and i just loved it like no other

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Emily Angel 22 July 2011

I can't describe how beautiful and true this poem seems to be.... I experience it day by day...Good work! ! ! Kudos to your skill! ! !

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