john tiong chunghoo

Gold Star - 5,083 Points (Jan 21,1960 / Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia)

A Death Blow Is A Life Blow To Some - Poem by john tiong chunghoo

a death blow is a life blow to many
whose world is a caged dream
a bird crying to do what other birds do
eating, mating, flying to the ends of the world
a death blow is a life blow to many
who live in other people's world
sharing its glory, except its happiness
a death blow is a life blow to
others in the same mould


Comments about A Death Blow Is A Life Blow To Some by john tiong chunghoo

  • (9/10/2006 4:27:00 AM)


    'a death blow is a life blow to...'great poem.a great blow to poetry! ! it's just FANTASTIC! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • (3/3/2006 3:24:00 AM)


    i really do not get this it sound great but i can not picture it as i only picture it to understand it.i find some words and sentence really good.i read a few and they are good and you are a great poet don't fell upset by what i said if you are i am sorry. kelly (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2005 4:22:00 PM)


    Great stuff! I like how you've crafted this poem into being totally yours. I think it ends very well, 'a death blow is a life blow to others in the same mould'. Well done.
    All the best, Seán
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 15, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, October 20, 2008


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