nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

A Different World - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

I was bit drunk and leaning to a lamp post
Then I had a dream of another world exists.
In the day time the moon is visible
Night you could see the sun.
Deaf they hear, blind they see and dumb they talk.
The rocks, trees and animals too communicate.
Cripple they walk.
No thieves, gamblers, liars and smugglers
So there won't be any politicians anyhow?
And money is strictly prohibited.


Comments about A Different World by nimal dunuhinga

  • (12/7/2009 1:00:00 PM)


    Wow! ! Anticlimax galore…and finish is splendid… ‘…And money is strictly prohibited.’
    Ten++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (11/12/2006 4:16:00 AM)


    Yes wouldnt that be wonderful..no money nothing to kill or die for I agree A beautiful dream from you. Wishing you a day full of joy-Pia (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2006 7:17:00 AM)


    A land with out money, a dream with out end, one this will be my friend but not in our time. take care Roy. (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (10/14/2006 9:33:00 PM)


    A very good write Nimal, another world, no politicians, hmmmm that's OK.------Melvina--- (Report) Reply

  • (9/17/2006 2:36:00 AM)


    I like the way you write about the impossible Perhaps part of the impossible can be possible if there would be more people like you around Interesting and different I like it (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2006 2:31:00 AM)


    Short and sweet. Well crafted poem.

    Anjana
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  • (7/19/2006 2:08:00 PM)


    This is a very interesting poem. Very nicely written. (Report) Reply

  • (7/1/2006 1:52:00 PM)


    won't be any politicians, .............great poem...................... (Report) Reply

  • Linda Ori (4/1/2006 1:57:00 PM)


    Sounds like a perfect world. If we all had this dream, could it not be so?
    Linda
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  • (3/26/2006 11:10:00 AM)


    I would love to take a stroll with the tree in my front yard, always there when I get home. :) A smart conclusion and good write. :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 7, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 8, 2006


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