A Dot Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Dot

Rating: 5.0


In the pale blue sky
It's like a dot
And I imagined
Whether a bird or a butterfly?
Though a fledged still she gathers the passing clouds as wings
To flee in the uncertain visionary vista.

Wednesday, April 7, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: butterfly,clouds,wings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 28 June 2010

Levitating metaphor galore…dot has become jocund spot ……. thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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