A Dreamer's Peninsula Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Dreamer's Peninsula

Rating: 5.0


I dreamed on and off few days ago
A passing cloud, honey and salt
Bees and Oceans,
And it seemed to be a fine combination.
My beloved grumbled 'Anyway, it's an omen dear; Who knows whether it's good or bad? '
'Yes darling, there is no any doubt that the passing cloud denotes my dark floating mind,
Bees give honey and oceans provide unlimited salt, isn't it?
But who brings us the evaporating happiness to our desperate shrinking hearts? '

* To my dearest pet-son 'Marco', Your pen-pusher father says so sorry as you skipped lot of scanty meals and suffered with us in your shaky kennel during our hard times.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 25 May 2008

Endearing, poignant, and truly Nimal. Your beloved Marco deserves the dedication. Always your poetess friend, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 25 May 2008

Your way with words is unique and fascinating. There is noone like you on this site. I feel privileged to be part of your PoemHunter pennings. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Joseph Daly 24 May 2008

What can I say? This is utterly beautiful my dear friend. Only you could unite such diverse things as Bees and Oceans. It takes a master to do that!

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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