A Dramatic Love Relation! ! ! Poem by Wael Karameh

A Dramatic Love Relation! ! !

Rating: 4.3


A Dramatic Love Relation…

Love is an exciting adventure
No one can predict its risk…
It can be born from a small look
From one word, from the smallest gesture…
In one day, it is enjoyment traveling in your back
The second day it causes you a very bad “disc”…
It is a dream, a bird you can never capture…
Love is so beautiful, so painful, so brisk! ! !

Love is an angry ocean…
Not like the face of the lake…
It is not a changing fashion
Not an easy decision we can make…
Love is a true full emotion
Not a short desire, it can never be fake…
Please babe…
You drive me crazy with your body motion
But move more, scream more…don’t stop! ! !
I don’t want to take any break! ! !

Wael Karameh
April 11,2009.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 25 September 2009

wow what a scream of joy............great powerful ending with fabulous flow of words and fine rhymes.......10

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ohhhhhh that was a strong ending..so beautifully and deeply written..a very true and beautiful definition for the love, , which is ful of pain andpleasure..loved an angry ocean it is and the hero who is able to dive and face and adapt it's waves...

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 11 April 2009

well done and it says a lot in particular with the subject terrific and smooth - mel

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