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A Dream In A Pretty World

Rating: 4.4
The pretty world Around us and in us Is like a flashy dream, When we grasp it, It flies away like a passing cloud. It's the dream that lives in us And we don't live in it because It does not stay. It's a difficult dream that Flips from between your hands. It's a tricky dream that You live it for long time, then It goes suddenly in a moment. It's a moment that goes quickly In a huge trip in one's life. It's our pretty dream that we Live it for a short period of time. This is our pretty life Summed up in one pretty moment That vanishes suddenly. The whole life is like a pretty Dream that is a moment that Goes away quickly though we feel it Like a long trip in our life.
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A B Faniki 01 September 2019
Brilliant imagination and creativety. I enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing
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Rini Shibu 13 October 2017
Beautiful poem.. Congratulations for poem of the day
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Wonderful poetic paragraph..just like a rainbow bubble bursting at the happiest moment...thank you for sharing..
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Vaibhav Simha 12 October 2017
It's more like a speech than like a poem. The content is great and I sense a poet in you, just put the word like how a true poet does and how a true poem should be. I hope you read my other poems and rate mine too. Regards, Vaibhav Simha.
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Anil Kumar Panda 12 October 2017
Sort of philosophical drop. The life is just a bubble that bursts at any time without giving any indication. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. Congrats.
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Tom Allport 12 October 2017
a wonderful and interesting poem about life's dream of which all living creatures participate in every day of their lives? ....................well written MS
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Hassan Hayati 12 October 2017
Congratulations for writing such a nice piece, I read it times. I think it is a right conception of life and dreams. Thanks Mohammad.
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Bharati Nayak 12 October 2017
Like a dream that is short lived, that seemed so real when sleeping, vanishes after we wake up, our life, the world around us and within us too changes. and the things that were so real for our life in the past stay with us like a dream in our consciousness.A nice philosophical write, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being the Poet of the Day.
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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2017
Such a heartwarming poem, Mohammad...congrats for being chosen once again....a highest 10++++++
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017
Wow! This is wonderful! Congratulations! Your beautiful dream poem has come on screen as the poem of the day. It's a tricky dream that you live it for long time and we hop for long to read. Moment of dream may go back so quickly but its tender touch remains in mind. An excellent poem this is...10
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