A Dream Lost In Time Poem by Emilia Rivera rio

A Dream Lost In Time

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A lone forlorn land,
With quietude and stillness
A violin shall stand
And stir the veil gossamers,

Shall thee play
To awake a golden stream
And thou, shall yield to prayer
As the lips of darkened creeks

An old dream
By a daffodil vale
And tinkles like rhyme
Next, to edelweiss dale

With all it's splendour
The strings of wedge
Shall dance on ligneous tendernes
And with all the fledge.

A slipping stargaze
An awakening woolgather
Shall disappear as seeing margate
And feels like bushwhacker.

This dream is undertaken
It feels like agony, despair
No melody no percussion
I don't know if to stare at lord's prayer

It is heartbreaking
As if lost in murk
The golden waking king
Shall sleep again with a smirk

No more waves of dance
No more sleeps on bower
A shady dew on a mayflower
A lapsing fall by a lavender

But loitering feet know where
So hark! And feet fit on the ground
Embrace the sweet harebells
For love knows where to roam.

Thursday, April 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,hope,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was inspired by a poem called dreams by langston hughes. It talks about a dream of playing a violin and how it was delayed or just forgotten
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 18 February 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Emilia. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Christopher Tye 05 July 2016

Nice poem, dream can only come true when we pursue them. Langston Hughes wrote a lot of great works and also inspires me a lot.

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Annette Aitken 03 July 2016

An old dream By a daffodil vale And tinkles like rhyme Next, to edelweiss dale you could pick any stanz to enjoy, but this one seems to stand out the most to me. Your words create a beauitful picture as you read along. Nicely penned. Annette

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 July 2016

No more waves of dance No more sleeps on bower A shady dew on a mayflower A lapsing fall by a lavender... is really beautiful. Nice poem with beautiful wording and flow.Loved it.

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