Heather Savage

Rookie (1990- / Federalway Washington)

A Dream Of Us - Poem by Heather Savage

I thought at last the pain had passed, And my feelings for you were through, But my thoughts lied... for again I cried
When I slept and my dreams were of you.
So vivid a picture- I felt it was real
As we sat holding hands by the sea
I stared in your eyes, looked deep in your soul
And I knew by your side I would be.
As the dream carried on the sea sang it's song
So we danced to the tune that it played
But the song wouldn't stay for the dream wore away
And I cried for the fool I portrayed.
I awoke filled with fear, surrounded in tears
Still hurt from the pains of the past
A mistake I had made, each night I have paid
Now I wonder how long it will last...


Comments about A Dream Of Us by Heather Savage

  • (12/19/2004 6:40:00 AM)


    Heather when i read this poem, i thought i was hearing the thought
    of a woman much older, not a girl i4 going on 15, i could be wrong
    it is a fine poem, but to me it is scary

    Kind regards
    AJS
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  • (12/16/2004 9:01:00 PM)


    Nice rhythm for the same old song.
    H
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 16, 2004



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