Old Teenage Poems


A Dreamer's Thoughts - Poem by Old Teenage Poems

Dreams of the future
I hold in my hand
Like pebbles or stones
Or an ocean of sand
They are heavy to carry
these dreams of mine
Like breezes, they're airy
And easily flow away

Without dreams present
Hope is neither there
And without our hopes
All we have is fear


Comments about A Dreamer's Thoughts by Old Teenage Poems

  • jake paul (1/23/2020 11:00:00 AM)

    hi my name is jake paul (Report)Reply

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  • Kaisar SagooKaisar Sagoo (3/7/2018 12:34:00 PM)

    without hope all is fear & only dreams bring hopes in our lives....good poem (Report)Reply

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  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/5/2010 10:54:00 AM)

    Dreams, like substance and hope of what can come to pass. An inspired poem indeed! : D (Report)Reply

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  • Raj ArumugamRaj Arumugam (1/3/2009 4:38:00 AM)

    the rhythm and the phrasing and the universality as you capture the feelings of everyone through the persona is just absolutely brilliant! (Report)Reply

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  • Mizushi Hikari (11/21/2007 5:23:00 AM)

    Hey...this poem is so good. It is inspiring me to make a poem again. Thanks a lot. (Report)Reply

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  • Sim Dan (11/11/2007 2:01:00 PM)

    Ja, Jag förstår. I want to stay and watch you grow in stature and happiness.
    Lycka till! :)
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  • Angel of Darkness (11/7/2007 10:11:00 AM)

    Very Inspiring poem. You're a great poet! !

    XOXO,
    Kolee aka Angel
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  • Angel of Darkness (11/7/2007 10:11:00 AM)

    Very Inspiring poem. You're a great poet! !

    XOXO,
    Kolee aka Angel
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  • Sim Dan (11/6/2007 11:23:00 AM)

    Dreams are our hopes for the morrow - your imagery is exhilarating, enthralling - you have an inner beauty that finds sweet expression. I like the way you perceive and connect. Enjoy your lines a lot. (Report)Reply

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  • Amanda Saveley (7/30/2007 5:47:00 PM)

    This is so amazingly true...our dreams really are heavy, and sometimes we cannot lift them, so they are difficult to bear and hang onto. Sometimes a strong wind comes through and carries them away...but we must cling to them, or all we have is the barren, cold, harsh reality that is life...sometimes that is difficult to bear, also. Great work. (Report)Reply

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  • Malini KadirMalini Kadir (5/24/2007 12:55:00 PM)

    dreamer lovable......you say is true...so very true..... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 6, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 22, 2011


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