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A Fatal Dose Of Goodbye - Poem by red barchettadrive

She sent a fatal
dose of goodbye
minus the smile.

My lungs crawled about
in search of their next breath...
diluted, tearless emotions
showed cracks in the corners.

Honesty can be cruel,
brutal at best.
Imprisoned deception
was freed on good behavior.

We always said it would kill again...

Topic(s) of this poem: goodbye

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about A Fatal Dose Of Goodbye by red barchettadrive

  • Chinedu Dike (6/18/2016 7:22:00 PM)


    Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely encapsulated in good diction with conviction. An insightful elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Red. (Report) Reply

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  • Jaishree Nair (11/7/2015 5:54:00 AM)


    The conundrum well defined. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • (11/7/2015 3:50:00 AM)


    Nicely penned! ! Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/7/2015 12:57:00 AM)


    A terse, poignant poem. Well written. Thanks, Red (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/7/2015 12:54:00 AM)


    A very interesting poem...

    Thank you for sharing..
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 7, 2015



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