A Favored Couple Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Favored Couple

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Why do you take it as a human caricature?
May be a favored person of the ancient nature,
At least he isn't ancient, he may be too old,
Not a diamond of bones, a flush of soft gold,
If a little heated, bravely he faces the hammer,
He is mended and modified in a nice manner,
Look at him he is now a pair of beautiful ear rings,
A necklace that touches her bosom and sweetly sings,
No surprise if he is singing an inviting love song,
With a heart soft enough and passion so strong,
Before a hug and a kiss she stretches her arms,
A ring for her finger and palms with palms,
Where from came the jewels, having such a glace,
The silk above a beautiful face offered this grace,
The deep seas below forehead provided the pearls,
The old woman in love is better than teen aged girls.

Friday, August 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: aging,love and life,wife
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 August 2019

To maintain deep love and care despite old age is a blessing. To feel and see.the loveliness and beauty in our beloved every single day will make life wonderful and heavenly. I am deeply touched by a lovely couple whose relationship keeps going stronger through the years. A beautiful and insightful poem with a meaningful message to humanity on marriage.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 August 2019

The silk above a beautiful face offered this grace, The deep seas below forehead provided the pearls, The old woman in love is better than teen aged girls. ITS OKAY FOR OLDIES TO SAY Young guys still lurk for young gals even today as you did in your youthful days have you forgotten so quickly I am looking still

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 August 2019

CONGRATULATIONS SIR JA UR NOW 316/500 I AM STILL WAITING SINCE NANO AGES

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Jane Campion 02 August 2019

To live love in old age is to outlast all. Great insights in this poem.

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