merna ibrahim

A Fight With Life

This is a duet from'Merna ibrahim & Angelica Ayman':

Maybe life will not give you everything.
I know it's prefidious and sometimes give you stings.
You can't get something with an ease,
You have to work hard and don't cease.


You have to toil from light to dark,
So you can hit your mark.
By the will & determination you can fulfill your aim.
And you must know that working and trying is not a shame.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 9, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 21, 2011

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  • Shahina Noufal (12/11/2010 12:13:00 AM)

    Nice job miss.merna.you egyptian? continue your works.be friends.iam new at PH

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (8/22/2010 3:54:00 AM)

    In this world to get some thing one has to give ‘more’ things …yeah I endorse your contemplative poem…very practical for life …enjoyed… thanks for sharing
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

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  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/10/2010 1:48:00 PM)

    They say life is what you make of it! . It is what we choose in life that makes the difference. A poem of hope and inspiration; D

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (6/16/2010 12:42:00 PM)

    nice lines
    great message

    well done
    cheers

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  • Beauty Philosophy (1/28/2010 5:16:00 AM)

    A well-penned poem with a good message. Your ideas and conceptions of things bear witness to your premature wisdom. Voted.

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  • Ravi SathasivamRavi Sathasivam (11/22/2009 5:39:00 AM)

    A good message is given here.
    Great expression of life.
    Yes, life is always beautiful.
    Thanks for sharing that with me
    Enjoyed
    10+

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  • Doha Ewiess (11/18/2009 10:46:00 AM)

    very wonderful expression about life....you both are so talanted....nice piece

    keep it up ;)
    Doha

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  • Philosophy of a DewyFlower (11/7/2009 7:29:00 AM)

    a WISE duet and a positive FIGHT! lovely to read.
    keep fighting your NOBLE VALUES! an inspired poem...
    10 +++
    GOD bless you both!

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  • Jazz Annis (10/10/2009 6:53:00 PM)

    that was really good! ! i enjoyed reading it and u guys gave me an idea..lol thanks! ! great poem! ! u two should write together more ofter! ! =)

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  • Angelica Ayman (9/15/2009 8:05:00 PM)

    i'm really so happy to write a poem with some one is really one in a million i will never find some one kind and friendly like her and i'm very proud to do this
    god bless her, , with love

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  • Lady Grace (8/19/2009 7:32:00 PM)

    go forward..life is beautiful dear..

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (8/16/2009 1:10:00 PM)

    You form a great team..both minds at play deliver this brilliantly to us...I hope you both write more together...well done...both 10+10++

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  • Kuji Soliman (8/16/2009 1:06:00 PM)

    Lovely, thanks merna and angelica, this is wonderfull!

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  • Yelena M. (8/13/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    A very successful duet I see here..with an inspiring message and wonderful rhyme.Thanks for sharing,10 of course :)
    A.

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  • Afzal Shauq (8/10/2009 1:45:00 PM)

    This is a duet from'Merna ibrahim & Angelica Ayman':

    Maybe life will not give u everything.

    this duet from you and your best friend Angelica ayman will never face failure if you both go side by side and make your joint fight against life.. pray for your both success..and best of luck 10/10

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  • Afzal Shauq (8/10/2009 1:43:00 PM)

    You have to toil from light to dark,
    So you can hit your mark.
    By the will&determination you can fulfill your aim.
    And you must know that working and trying is not a shame

    yes the best fight with life for success is the wise thing in life... and what you expressed here in this poem is interesting, logical and reality based sure, , , i agree with your sweet idea and wish if you never accpet defaet from life and always keep going a head being a strong person... sucess in each and every step is wished for you friend..10/10

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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (8/10/2009 12:10:00 PM)

    good fight....................may be if you fight relentlessly life might surrender.......a good write...

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  • Omar Ibrahim (8/10/2009 12:56:00 AM)

    a work for two talented poetesses that's why it's wonderful...
    a ten to merna and a ten to angelica....

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  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (8/9/2009 5:24:00 PM)

    Truly and rightly conveyed message in poetic form.....tenner

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