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Sunday, January 10, 2010

*utopia*

Rating: 3.3
Utopia is a place where you can find pure air
A place where everyone is kind, polite and fair
A place where there are Angels flying everywhere
A place where there is neither sadness nor despair.

In Utopia unique humans are not so rare
They all love each other and for emotions care
No envy, lying or hypocrisy - I swear
Everything and everyone's ideal I'm aware

I really really wish I really could be there
But going to Utopia's a big affair.

This poem is revised by the great poet'John Knight'
merna ibrahim
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 12 January 2017
I think utopia can be used to describe paradise. An insightful poem nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 March 2014
So did u write this wondrful utopian poem? If people chose other means than violence then this utopia cud be real. Lovely rhymin. I hope u read my latest poem too.
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Mohammad Skati 13 February 2013
HI, MERNA.IT'S A GREAT POEM, BUT TRY TO BE MORE POETIC.THANKS.
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Rakesh Rampariya 12 August 2012
hope you will be there early
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Mariam Amr 12 November 2010
I think utopia is the best place for you.I think that you need angels to deal with, we really need an ideal society as in utopia.
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R. H. Peat 05 July 2010
Oh I know why utopia isn't there It can never be found anywhere With all those differences to bare it's known that utopia wouldn't dare. And that's utopia's little snare there's too much hate for prayer, and that's why utopia's so rare; that's why utopia is nowhere. a poet friend RH Peat
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Zeinab Sherif 05 February 2010
bravo! it is veeeeeeerrrryyyyyyyyyy.......very....very..oh my god i don't know what 2 say it is a very digestive poem i used the word digestive 2 prepare myself for the biology next term.nice, nice, nice.it is simple meaningful wonderful poem.
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Farah Aliah 30 January 2010
So cute...I hope the whole world is like that 100.............................................++++++++++++++
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so lovely land, I can see it, it's not far it's in my mind, in the mind of each reader too! ! ! I like it so much Thanks For Sharing Sister!
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Chitra - 13 January 2010
thanks Merna for opening the gates to Utopia! ! And you in a way have made us realise that PH is our online Utopia!
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