Utopia is a place where you can find pure air
A place where everyone is kind, polite and fair
A place where there are Angels flying everywhere
A place where there is neither sadness nor despair.
In Utopia unique humans are not so rare
They all love each other and for emotions care
No envy, lying or hypocrisy - I swear
Everything and everyone's ideal I'm aware
I really really wish I really could be there
But going to Utopia's a big affair.
This poem is revised by the great poet'John Knight'
Oh I know why utopia isn't there It can never be found anywhere With all those differences to bare it's known that utopia wouldn't dare. And that's utopia's little snare there's too much hate for prayer, and that's why utopia's so rare; that's why utopia is nowhere. a poet friend RH Peat
bravo! it is veeeeeeerrrryyyyyyyyyy.......very....very..oh my god i don't know what 2 say it is a very digestive poem i used the word digestive 2 prepare myself for the biology next term.nice, nice, nice.it is simple meaningful wonderful poem.
So cute...I hope the whole world is like that 100.............................................++++++++++++++
so lovely land, I can see it, it's not far it's in my mind, in the mind of each reader too! ! ! I like it so much Thanks For Sharing Sister!
Know it all that Utopia is quite an imaginary place. If have the will we can make our utopia right here on our earth. Top score
I think utopia can be used to describe paradise. An insightful poem nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
So did u write this wondrful utopian poem? If people chose other means than violence then this utopia cud be real. Lovely rhymin. I hope u read my latest poem too.
HI, MERNA.IT'S A GREAT POEM, BUT TRY TO BE MORE POETIC.THANKS.
hope you will be there early
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I think utopia is the best place for you.I think that you need angels to deal with, we really need an ideal society as in utopia.