merna ibrahim


A Gold Treasure - Poem by merna ibrahim

Health is a gift so value it.
Protect it and don't let it drift.
Health is a noble and valuable prize.
Don't waste it - preserve it - be wise.

Appetites of life are a lot.
Without health - enjoy you cannot.
Health is the key to happiness and joy.
The best a human can enjoy.

Money is the silver treasure.
Can be exchanged for something else.
But your health is really gold treasure.
It is really your inner wealth.


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  • (9/29/2010 1:50:00 PM)

    ‘Appetites of life are a lot.’ ~ Good thought …add life to life not days… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Merna
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10
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  • (7/22/2010 3:31:00 AM)

    u r right health is a gold treasure so as ur unique absolutely interestin talent of writin poems & ur absolutely wonderful rose inside u....ur heart i give u 10+++++ & RAMADAN KAREEM (Report)Reply

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  • (7/13/2010 7:12:00 AM)

    so good, so wise, so nice... Bravo Merna, I loved your verses, indeed Health is the Golden Wealth. when the health is in decline the whole universe seems dark. we have to thank ALLAH for the boon of Health.

    ThanksForSharing Dear Sis.
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  • (6/23/2010 12:57:00 PM)

    So true! Our health needs to be treasured, looked after. Without our health we have nothing. Meaningful poem. Lovely! ; D (Report)Reply

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  • (3/1/2010 2:26:00 PM)

    beautiful plea for health...very inspiring words of wisdom.. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/24/2010 4:11:00 AM)

    truly exemplifies the essence of the golden proverb...health is wealth.! !
    a profound recipe for good health
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  • Howard The Motivational Poet Simon (2/23/2010 1:53:00 PM)

    Wonderful words about a subject that is more valuable that money. Well done my friend! (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (2/21/2010 10:18:00 AM)

    Merna, you are right, a very well penned poem based in the truth, hoping our readers get the message, keep it up,10+++ (Report)Reply

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  • Ravi Sathasivam (2/20/2010 3:16:00 AM)

    'Money is the silver treasure.
    Can be exchanged for something else.
    But your health is really golden treasure.
    It really is your inner wealth'.....
    Well penned poem with deep thought
    Its really the Golden treasure.
    Enjoyed reading it
    Thanks for sharing with me
    10++
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  • (2/19/2010 11:51:00 AM)

    well done merna i'm so proud of you, to realize that point
    it's good for you and thnx for sharing
    10+++++
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  • (2/19/2010 9:44:00 AM)

    yes you are correct..then why don't you eat fruits and drink milk? ? : D
    thanks for sharing.
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  • (2/19/2010 7:08:00 AM)

    deep thoughts Dear Merna... Health is invaluable... Thank GOD for such a grace... a well penned poem
    10+++++
    ThanksForSharing WiseSister/
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  • Allemagne Roßmann (2/19/2010 1:05:00 AM)

    Statutory advice
    Health is a gift so value it.
    Protect it and don't let it drift.

    Health is wealth yeah agreed--golden treasure.10/10 for the work.
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  • (2/18/2010 6:15:00 PM)

    You did a fine job at writing this. well done. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/18/2010 1:47:00 PM)

    it is really the golden treasure, that canno be back by money or by anything else..
    i think health and love are the two things that when they gone, you cant let them back.

    nice one,
    thanks
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  • (2/18/2010 10:38:00 AM)

    rite..rite...rite.nothing is more valuable then health among earthly treausres...a good wise write........ (Report)Reply

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  • (2/18/2010 10:29:00 AM)

    wow what a sweet golden treasure...money, appetite and health...wonderfully done this sweet poem with a good logic and meaningful way..after a long time I saw your new poem which is undoubtfully rich, charming and impressive enough..I enjoyed it a lot..well done..and it deserves 10++++++++++++++ points (Report)Reply

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  • (2/18/2010 10:16:00 AM)

    well done, , great poem
    thank's for charring
    10++
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 18, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, June 30, 2011


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