A Letter To The Human

Rating: 4.9

This poem is revised by the great poet'John Knight'.

Yes, you were born my friend without an aim.
The circled target board was created by you.
This is not wrong within this life, it's true.
Don't be frustrated, it is not a shame.
Dream, Be ambitious-work- and don't be lame.
Be happy, don't deprive yourself a shoe.
As long as it is something you can do.
Don't blame yourself- We're humans it's a game.


The most important thing's your peace of mind.
Believe me, this will make you live and strive.
What is the life but to amuse and play? *
Search and you won't find something left behind.
You need to play the game to stay alive.
And wake to live and live another day.


(*) The idea of this verse is extracted from the Holy Quran:
(w ma al haiat al donya ela lae'eb w lahww)

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wonderfull! ! ! ! a great poem....u write so well merna! ! ! ! fantastic! ! ! !

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Liz Williams 01 March 2010

'You need to play the game to stay alive. And wake to live and live another day. ' -fantastic. <3 liz

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a sonnet eh.. Italien too.. goooooooo you! ! :) well done.

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Rania Hammoud 23 January 2010

IT's a wise letter U write so well merna though u r still young I liked ur writind Well DOne.

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Caitlin. w 04 January 2010

=] i love it baby 10/10

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Abdallah Gamal 18 July 2011

U've chose a very important point that we face it everyday, , we care only about the distractions of the world like football matches, the newest albums songs, who will win who will lose and we forgot about win and lose at after world, , U've chose an important point and u've figured it very well :) rated 10

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Louis Rams 27 November 2010

a very good write and a good point enjoyed it!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 August 2010

‘The most important thing's your peace of mind.’ ~ World needs Peace most …humane poetry…every human being must mull on peace… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 [for Peace]

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 August 2010

The most important thing's your peace of mind. Believe me, this will make you live and strive. yes peace is all that we need. we shall strive for peace in the midst of a tumultous world. thank yu for spreading this idea..

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Saadat Tahir 01 July 2010

thats a fantastic idea... picking on devine revlation for poetic discourse... well chosen and well written cheers

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