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A Fly Haiku

As I wash my hands
The fly on the window sill
Is washing hers too.

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Kee Thampi 18 August 2006

the sun shines in your little words, fuss and a kiss

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A. B. 17 August 2006

hehe. Pete, this is a cool one. Peace.

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Melvina Germain 13 August 2006

A fantastic observation Peter, very nice indeed, I really like this one. Thankyou---Melvina

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Terry Hartery 06 August 2006

Brilliant poem. Well done, Peter. Terry

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Ernestine Northover 06 August 2006

Yep! Peter. They do look as if they are doing just that don't they. Wonderful observation. Great Haiku. Well done indeed. Liked this lots. Love Ernestine XXX

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Fairly powerful, the dual image and the realization that maybe, we aren't so removed.

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Aldo Kraas 05 January 2007

Not a bad poem It is short and brief

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Anna Russell 28 August 2006

Sweet observation - it's funny the things that insipre us. Hugs Anna xxx

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Kee Thampi 18 August 2006

the sun shines in your little words, fuss and a kiss

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Kee Thampi 18 August 2006

the sun shines in your little words, fuss and a kiss

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