A Fly In Amber Poem by Pete Crowther

A Fly In Amber

Rating: 3.5


Swimming in its world of amber
The long-legged fly can still remember

The burning heat
Of the sun in the Eocene

From its golden sea, this fly has seen
The dance of continents, the rise and fall

Of all ten thousand things
Upon our planet.

In the many facets of its eyes
Seas have filled with water, deepened, dried,

Mountain ranges risen, crumbled.
This fly has seen the centaur and the unicorn

And the first Neanderthal.
Nations, empires passed before it,

Wave after wave in quick succession.
This fly was in its amber when

King Cheops built his pyramid
And Roman Caesar conquered Gaul.

Now with this ancient creature in my palm
I am become
The green flash of the setting sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philippa Lane 18 March 2005

How brilliant can you get? Love 'the dance of continents' and the entire content of this poem humbled me. So original in its thinking.

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Linda Preston 30 March 2005

this poem transports you to another world, and beautifully chosen words too but the enjambments are somewhat arbitrary.

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Sylvia Spencer 02 April 2005

Peter i am a great collector of amber I have many pieces and I can really relate to this poem it is beautiful. I love the words and such meaning 10+ cheers sylvia

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Robert Howard 25 July 2007

Ohhh, I like it. Great fusion of distant past and present and everything in between. Elegantly composed.

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Scarlett Treat 06 February 2006

I actually feel as though I have stepped back in time, seen what the fly saw, from the beginning of time. Wonderful poem.

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Lyrael Myrna 17 November 2005

I love this poem. It's so beautifully crafted and detailed. There's a nice use of onomatopoeia. Thanks for keeping poetry real. Ciao. Lyrael

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Simon Zonenblick 11 November 2005

Detailed, descriptive, historical, original. Very enjoyable to read.

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Gershon Hepner 08 July 2005

Wonderful poem. The last line with the green flash is particularly powerrful. Gershon Hepner

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Pete Crowther

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Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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