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A Fragment Into Nature....

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A FRAGMENT INTO NATURE….

I quietly drove up the horizon,
the light yellow light gleam slowly changes to light orange,
making the rocks bounce in your face
Oops!
How dazzling,
but also affectionately beautiful,
driving in full sun,
to see a little black dot from afar,

when I get closer it turns out to be the sea,
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Friday, June 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: verse
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A Fragment Into Nature....

I just keep driving.

Meanwhile the streetlights are on,
twilight has fallen
and I drive back under the rising moonlight,
no, tonight it is not yet a full moon,
too bad!

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Friday 5 June 2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 06 June 2020

Natural beauty recovers mind and when we see sea near ocean waves the calm refection of moonlight towards us, we feel God’s wonder. Nature’s beauty beholds beauty and love for us. We feel the motherly affection. We feel God’s touch that he gives us through calmness. Each wave of tender breeze ignites our path of journey. You have high perception about the excellent imagery drawn here...10

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