Aditya Pratap

Rookie - 198 Points (28/05/1990 / Rourkela)

A Friend - Poem by Aditya Pratap

There was a friend
A friend I loved
You are the one with love I hugged
Lovely times together spent
every word so truly meant
There was a friend
A friend I loved

colors of friendship forever stained
Levels of happiness with you obtained
Lovely hearted and innocent eyed
With you my friend I am satisfied
There was a friend
A friend I loved
You are the one with love I hugged

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship

Comments about A Friend by Aditya Pratap

  • (9/1/2015 5:34:00 PM)

    Love the line, You are the one with love I hugged. A unique way of stating love for another! With a true friendship all these things and more come to pass, very beautiful and heartfelt poem! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    (9/1/2015 5:50:00 PM)

    Thank you mam for appreciating. That friend is lost now My poem I wished reflects a part of it.

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  • Chinedu Dike (9/1/2015 1:45:00 PM)

    A good depiction of the essence of true friendship, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with beautiful rhyme scheme. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Aditya. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (8/27/2015 7:09:00 AM)

    The poet says he had a lovely and innocent hearted friend with whom he had happy time in life! (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/26/2015 10:23:00 PM)

    To love a friend is one of life's joys. Thanks for sharing, Aditya (Report) Reply

  • Tushar Ray (8/26/2015 7:30:00 PM)

    Clear imagery with heartfelt feelings - I love this poem. Thank you Aditya! Tushar Ray (Report) Reply

    (8/31/2015 4:09:00 PM)

    These line are very close to my heart. It feels good that you liked it.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 26, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 27, 2015

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