A Friend Poem by Aditya Pratap

A Friend

Rating: 4.5


There was a friend
A friend I loved
You are the one with love I hugged
Lovely times together spent
every word so truly meant
There was a friend
A friend I loved

colors of friendship forever stained
Levels of happiness with you obtained
Lovely hearted and innocent eyed
With you my friend I am satisfied
There was a friend
A friend I loved
You are the one with love I hugged

Wednesday, August 26, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 01 September 2015

Love the line, You are the one with love I hugged. A unique way of stating love for another! With a true friendship all these things and more come to pass, very beautiful and heartfelt poem! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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Aditya Pratap 01 September 2015

Thank you mam for appreciating. That friend is lost now My poem I wished reflects a part of it.

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Chinedu Dike 01 September 2015

A good depiction of the essence of true friendship, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with beautiful rhyme scheme. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Aditya. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Ramesh T A 27 August 2015

The poet says he had a lovely and innocent hearted friend with whom he had happy time in life!

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Kelly Kurt 26 August 2015

To love a friend is one of life's joys. Thanks for sharing, Aditya

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Tushar Ray 26 August 2015

Clear imagery with heartfelt feelings - I love this poem. Thank you Aditya! Tushar Ray

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Aditya Pratap 31 August 2015

These line are very close to my heart. It feels good that you liked it.

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