# A Funny Situation Demanded..... Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# A Funny Situation Demanded.....

Rating: 4.7


all the money
to the last penny
was found to be proxy
in that country

all essentials
should be freely available
the governance ordered
which brought in this disorder

who does not have a need
for the essentials
right from the cop to the thief
had a need for it that day

opened stores were looted
closed one's were broke open
hand in glove were they
the cop and the thief

a commotion in town
every law broken
the temples barren
even the priest lost his calm

a situation which would not calm down
the governing body had almost broke down
a let loose situation for the hooligans
WHO DOES NOT HAVE A NEED FOR ESSENTIALS

GOD INTERVENED
A FUNNY SITUATION DEMANDED...
A SUPER POWER'S INTERVENTION
AN EARTH QUAKE ROCKED THE TOWN
ALL LOOTERS WERE DRIVEN OUT OF STORES
TO SEE MAN MADE ESSENTIALS CRUMBLE

LIFE THE MOST ESSENTIAL

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 07 September 2009

interesting indeed and well-narrated

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Lynn Glover 06 September 2009

A good funny poem with the civilian authorities and the crook teaming up. Very good write for a 10. Your friend Lynn

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Sathyanarayana M V S 04 September 2009

God may come in human form as the ultimate Kalki. But as He Himself said 'yada yada hi dharmasya glanirbhavathi Bharatha............' in Geeta, when the sins overtake and virtues downturn, he does something or other to correct the situation and bring in equilibrium......... Good poem

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Ravi A 03 September 2009

If all the essential commodities are made available in a free manner, money is not at all required. Every thief requires these essentials and when money has no value, who will loot for either money or the essentials? Money has no value and essentials are also available in the country. My view is that there will be no robbers either. What will the robbers rob afterall?

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 02 September 2009

A funny situation with a moral ending. Much to ponder about humanity. thanks for sharing.

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 September 2009

Good imagination. Nice description. Deserves 1010101010101010101010

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Patrick A. Martin 18 September 2009

Nice ideas coming together.

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Kesav Easwaran 15 September 2009

good write SLN...thanks...10

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 12 September 2009

different ending, nice poem... well composed

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 09 September 2009

A funny and well narrated poem.

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