Heather Burns

A Gathering - Poem by Heather Burns

I sat and watched clouds gathering
taking on familiar faces

I was taken back to yesterday
when as children playing together

running on the beach gathering
shells for our collections

building castles in the sand
teasing each other about tomorrow

how quickly time passes.

Topic(s) of this poem: friendship

Comments about A Gathering by Heather Burns

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (7/18/2015 12:10:00 PM)

    Bursting with the beauty and brevity of life! (Report) Reply

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  • (5/14/2014 9:43:00 AM)

    Well done poet.wonderfully created a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/7/2014 10:32:00 PM)

    This is wonderful. Well done (Report) Reply

  • Marisa Eutsler (5/5/2014 11:08:00 AM)

    oh how time does pass. love this much (Report) Reply

  • Carol Fleming Klein (3/30/2014 8:32:00 PM)

    Nostalgic. And appropo imagery: the sand, the ephemeral drifting clouds bringing back glimpses of the past. And the fleeting element of time. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (11/28/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    As the time passes rememberance of childhood becomes more fresh (Report) Reply

  • Chris G. Vaillancourt (8/29/2013 3:52:00 PM)

    Quite a magical writing! ........... (Report) Reply

  • (7/14/2013 3:55:00 PM)

    Yes it does run on doesn't it? We are always greedy for more life, and why shouldn't we be? Your poem reminded me of so many things.. ;) (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (6/6/2013 8:21:00 AM)

    How great it is to be taken back to precious memories. Time certainly does pass too quickly. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (6/5/2013 12:41:00 AM)

    Yes, how quickly time passes! Decades slipped off in the split of a second! ! How quickly we are moving towards the evening of our life! Only with nostalgia, we can relate to our childhood! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (5/31/2013 7:42:00 AM)

    nostalgic and commemorating to childhood, it describes the simple pleasures of days bygone. (Report) Reply

  • (5/30/2013 5:24:00 AM)

    Time does pass quickly but only in retrospect as on the way through it goes slow, like a snail sometimes. These days it does me good to just sit quietly and let a minute pass and remember how long a minute really is as life rushes by. Time is a strange conception, man made to work out when to get up, when to travel, when to work......I'm putting it in room 101: o)))))) Ruth who hopes time won't notice her age ;) (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (5/28/2013 10:17:00 PM)

    We must all make good use of the time that we have.
    Every moment should be spent with something memorable.
    For time waits for no man. I invite you to read Time is Short.
    A good write.
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  • Shahzia Batool (5/14/2013 12:52:00 PM)

    a memorable poem on childhood memories, naturally felt, naturally presented! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (5/13/2013 1:07:00 AM)

    a very nostalgic romantic poem..with a distinctive style of narration with beautiful technique..love it (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (8/26/2011 8:48:00 AM)

    Time and tide waits for none...Well said.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 8, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, September 15, 2014

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