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A Broken Heart (Prose)

Rating: 4.3

When you left my heart
was broken
tiny pieces were scattered
everywhere
my search to find and
repair the damage began

I grew very excited for
in my search
thinking I had finally

gathered all the pieces
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Monday, September 2, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 26 October 2014

I think the missing tiny piece was trust, when it vanishes it is never found again.

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Marisa Eutsler 05 May 2014

so well written, and this is so true. love it oh so much

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Amitava Sur 05 February 2014

Very well detailing about the irrepairable loss, resulting to a broken heart..... very well written You may read my poems - 1) All at a time 2) Cause

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Lily Mosweu 25 September 2014

Indeed, a broken heart never forgets. The pain, the love... One might mask it all but deep down they can never run away from it. I love it!

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Roseann Shawiak 30 September 2013

Thank you very much for your comment on my poem, Words Of Expression. I appreciate it and the fact that you read my poem. Once your heart has been broken it is scarred forever even if you piece it back together. A new love may help you regain your balance, but the scar is there nevertheless throughout life, causing the heart to always remember, just as you stated in last line of your poem. Beautiful write. Thank you for sharing.

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Very touching! And I like the style of the poem with the lines running on from one verse to another.

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Marvin Brato 07 December 2017

Yes a broken heart can not be mend but it can still beat for someone else who is worth the love! Sentimental romantic poem.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 November 2017

Heart broken! Nice poem

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Nudershada Cabanes 17 September 2017

The heart will always remember.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 April 2016

Love and pain! ! When you left my heart was broken. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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