A Great Night, But A Bad Start To The Morning! Poem by Daniel P Martin

A Great Night, But A Bad Start To The Morning!

Rating: 2.8


You make a decision,
To clear your vision,
But the world has gone all blury.

You’ve really tried,
To dismount this ride,
But your body is in no hurry.

You walk alone,
Heading for home,
But the pavement looks so cosy.

You settle down,
Upon the ground,
And your body becomes quite dozy.

Tarmac to cheek,
Your drift asleep,
Though your mattress feels quite strange,

You come around,
To a tinkling sound,
As a passerby throws you some change.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 28 January 2012

Brilliant!

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Sally Plumb Plumb 27 October 2011

Very funny ending.

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Shadow Girl 04 September 2011

ha! Well written Daniel..liked it. Great ending! ! ! SG

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Eric Cockrell 02 September 2011

like this one a lot... well written!

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