Thampi KEE

A Hand On Her Gown: The Peace

Peace is not a betrayal of this beloved
Peace is a not a mere humming song.
Peace is my lovely girl

She falling back to me
She is a star that I can see here

I know you are there, somewhere here
I’ll not miss you this curly hair
I’ll not want to miss the smell of this beloved…..

I know you’ll come back some day
I’m praying that you are there, somewhere here
Hope you remember me appaling again….

I’ll not miss this purple lintel
I’ ll not kiss this lovely lint


Peace is not really a gossip
Peace is not a mere hand on her purple gown.
Peace is not a gypsy affair.
Peace is not a gobbling prayer

You falling me back again
The star that I can see in this soaring altar
This star I can see in a dashed anchor....

Hope you remember me again and again

Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 7, 2006
Poem Edited: Friday, September 3, 2010

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  • Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (1/26/2015 1:05:00 AM)

    Hope you remember me again and again......that is peace and it is great writing.

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  • Chris G. VaillancourtChris G. Vaillancourt (8/30/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    A very thought provoking poem

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (5/13/2009 3:47:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem for the love and the peace which surely will remember the loving waiting hearts..these hearts are the one who will create their virtue universe..well done..

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  • Manonton Dalan (9/7/2008 1:47:00 PM)

    love, pride and happiness put into one. nice poem. thank you for sharing.md

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  • Indira Babbellapati (7/4/2008 2:53:00 AM)

    finally all of us do enjoy the embrace of peace, don't we?

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  • Josie WhiteheadJosie Whitehead (6/29/2007 11:01:00 AM)

    Peace lies in your heart - no, it is not a humming song or a betrayal. Exactly right. These are lovely sentiments.

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  • Amanda May Moore (6/27/2007 10:06:00 AM)

    Peace is in knowing love.
    -lovely

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  • Sandra Fowler (6/16/2007 4:30:00 PM)

    Wonderful title. Fabulous poem. Take care.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra

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  • BEAU GOLDEN (5/29/2007 3:11:00 AM)

    Kee this is a beautiful signature piece of work!
    beau

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  • Kavita Bhat (1/5/2007 4:51:00 AM)

    hi,
    your perspective on peace is awesome!

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  • Aldo Kraas (1/4/2007 12:48:00 PM)

    Any girl should be lovely
    And should be treated like a gentle flower
    This poem is wonderfil
    It is well written

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  • Selina Tan (10/31/2006 7:39:00 AM)

    i like the way you animated peace. Very forward and direct yet precise. The style and structure is simple and doesn't bore the reader with description but the substance did not suffer. great poem.

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  • Trinity K (10/16/2006 3:13:00 AM)

    its so lovely to see someone craving for peace....tranquility? inner? or this turmoil is not of your making, , , , , wait to see balance return...it will, thampi.....

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  • Anne Jojo (10/7/2006 9:00:00 AM)

    reaally cooool! Kee the only way i can describe most of u'r poems, the ones i've read... pure silk! and thanx 4 u'r comments on my poem

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  • Nina Joseph (9/27/2006 12:11:00 AM)

    i never imagined how you potrayed peace like, from the love of a girl.This is a great picture language, a very fantastic knowledge in poem.Great art!

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  • Anjana Aravind (9/13/2006 11:33:00 PM)

    True, this one is the best.

    Anjana

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  • Sylvia Spencer (9/13/2006 5:25:00 AM)

    Hi Kee this poem is your best yet. Nalini is right this is just great and you will get better and better because you have a great gift of words. cheers Sylvie

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  • Nalini Hebbar (9/7/2006 10:36:00 AM)

    you have improved so much...thampi...this is your best poem...love...nalini

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjrFrank James Ryan Jr...fjr (9/7/2006 7:08:00 AM)

    Beautiful piece, Thampi..A strong statement well expressed...Smooth fluxion, well
    structured...All around fine crafted work''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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