A Heavenly Story Poem by Thampi KEE

A Heavenly Story

Rating: 4.6


I can see through your eyes
A heaven now and holy love will flow
no one can see you now
not awaits the dark side of you,


they say not a clown
the girl she looks not a cute
I guess they are not mad like me
just a stranger
look a friend in this heaven

I never say no
you know I never make jokes
we made it now
helen, the heaven you makes here

Wednesday, February 7, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: heaven
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preetam Shetty 19 May 2010

You rightly compared love to divinity......while making your point that Love does not care about looks

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Leila Taghavi 11 March 2010

Nice written poem! Thanks so much for reading 'poeverty' too.

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'We made it now' Rachel Ann Butler

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Marieta Maglas 26 August 2009

wonderful poem, very well written............10

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 18 August 2009

The theme is excellent, the composition is also very interesting.

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Marydel Cranzo 04 May 2015

well done, sir! , nice poem.

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Marydel Cranzo 04 May 2015

wonderful composition :)

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 02 August 2012

datz...........z..... actually like a suspense love story....................

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Lawrence H 20 March 2012

Kee, Your poem is good, but still unsure what are you trying to portray about heavenly story?

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Miriam Maia Padua 02 November 2011

you write so well... hope to read your new poems soon... do write new poems..your readers are waiting, I know..

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