A Happy New-Year To All Poem by ritty patnaik

A Happy New-Year To All

Rating: 5.0


the year end
is in a nostalgic mood.,
where the old year
is covered with a shroud..
many joys and heartbreaks,
we are through,
let us look forward
to something new.

the new era begins with
a winking at time,
as day breaks,
and the new sun shines.
forget the past,
forget the pain,
let the new year
not make us vain.

cautiously we step,
and begin the year,
with a quickening of heart,
and a thump in the chest,
the new -year is here,
with gods blessings,
hope it will be the best

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 09 January 2010

The book of life is full of suspense, where each year is like an unread page, hope that this particular page will turn exciting and joyous, powerful enough to lift the gloom and sorrow of gone by pages, a lovely write, ritty, keep shining! 10

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Jean Dament 03 January 2010

A lovely poem that brings hope to the New Year ahead of us. Your poem has a great natural flow to it. Thanks for sharing. Happy New Year to You! Spiritsong

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Mamta Agarwal 02 January 2010

Ritti, your poems have a rhythm and music, and the style such that one reads it aloud. moving on with your best foot forward happy new year.thanks for your lovely message. Mamta

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John Knight 30 December 2009

Hi Ritty - Nice Poem - Lovely rhythm and rhyme. I score it a TEN, V 1 Nostalgia and 'Looking forward to something new! ' a nice balance. V 2 A positive resolution! 'Forget the past - Forget the pain' V 3 A touch of caution - and a touch of Faith - awesome. 'With a quickening heart - and with God's blessing - hope it will be the BEST, Love in Poetry - JOHN

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