A Heaven Sent Gift Poem by Shaun Cronick

A Heaven Sent Gift

Rating: 5.0


Dream me a dream,
Let it float away.
I'll catch here,
Where I now stay.

Just one last dream,
Of our love last shared.
Before I moved on,
Leaving you alone and scared.

For I'll dream you dream,
A vision like no other.
One to become reality,
As you'll soon discover.

Just one hour on earth,
For me kindly gifted.
To deliver you His message,
Then your burdens lifted

You must now move on,
And find a good man.
Both live a good life,
For that is God's plan.

And after I leave,
You will forget me.
But I'll be happy,
Your heart's now free.

Tuesday, August 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,heartache,hope,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 21 August 2020

Thanks Dominic for your welcomed comments and I'm sure the right girl will come along. And always when one does least expect it. Take care.

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Shaun Cronick 21 August 2020

Thank you again Rose Marie for your kind and gracious comments. I am pleased it has touched your good heart. Take care and again my thanks.

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Dominic Windram 19 August 2020

Beautiful poem Shaun..very heart warming indeed. I've got to find myself a good woman..or a bunch of average ones...I jest of course...sort of. These days it's like looking for a needle in a haystack...so I don't really bother. I'd much rather use my time productively and creatively I certainly enjoy my freedom. Consequently, I don't think it would now be possible for me to me tied down. Anyway, I digress...It's another touching ten from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 August 2020

Oh, what a very uplifting poem. It touched the core of heart And made me teary eyed. So tenderly and lovingly penned. So beautifully crafted. To my Poem List.

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